Review Detail of 5paghetti_5auce in TBATE- the kings brother, always and forever

Thank you so much for the beautifully well narrated fanfic. I had a blast revisiting the early chapters of tbate: good grammar, well rapresented character (you captured pretty well how they were in the original), good pacing and neat new interactions. For now I see that the story hasn't changed that much but I'm looking forward to where you're are going to bring the story (hopefully it will diverge from Canon even by a little, although I'm already having fun reading this while it's still following the same course). Keep up the good work P. S. I will repeat myself:I'm a fan of your writing style, it's really polished