Review Detail of Kiiara in Game of Royals : A Commoner’s Journey

It's a interesting plot with a great world building. I love author's approach in monarchy era and I'm excited for Jack's journey as a new noble in the castle. Hopefully he got the princess lol. Now, the only issue is I guess the long dense paragraph. If you don't mind me suggesting, it'll be better to break down the paragraph to ease the reading. Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck! <3