Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Game of Royals : A Commoner’s Journey

For a beginning author, you did pretty well, mate! I really like how you wrote the entire chapter! *For starters, you should "Borrow" *cough* an image that perfectly fits your story in google. Yeah, i know, copyright, but, that is just for now. You could ask artist to commission a book cover so your novel would become a chef's kiss book~ *There are grammatical errors here and there but not enough to disrupt me from my reading. it was actually really good! Well, there are the use of adverbs, redudancy of "far away" you could use distant or miles away to make it sound more dramatic. At the end of the day, these are just my suggestions. You still have the last touch for editting your story. Kudos for the author, and good luck, mate!