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Blue_Pizza
Blue_PizzaLv43yrBlue_Pizza

Omg. The worldbuilding—I am in awe. Author, you are a master of worldbuilding, and I respect you for that. It's so colourful and intricate and special. I could literally picture everything in great detail and see myself walking alongside the Draakin. Second of all, the writing is near flawless. I decided to go with full stars for writing quality in the end because I think those typos were accidental (and the odd misplaced gull stop) but it would be great if you went back, proofread and edited those little mistakes. The protagonist is likable, has her own unique personality and background etc, so nice character development. Updates are consistent so far and my reading experience has been good. There's a lot of timeskip at the start which threw me off a bit, but I suppose it's all necessary for the plot. Anyways, looking forward to more chapters. Keep it up, author!

Fantasy of Ash and Blood

Nullinvoid

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Nullinvoid
NullinvoidAuthorNullinvoid

Thank you for the kind compliment. I Always want to strive for better worldbuilding. Expect two more chapters in the next day give or take.

Blue_Pizza
Blue_PizzaLv4Blue_Pizza

*Oops. I meant full stop. (See, typo gets to all of us)