Review Detail of Luminous_Arcadian in Glance of his

This story is so real, and the characters are too human. They're not perfect and have flaws. It was good and relatable in some ways. I like how the story was conveyed in the form of a diary entry. It doesn't give a lot of details about the protagonist's world but her own thoughts that would make you feel it too. It was good, although I could find quite a few typographical and some grammatical errors. I think it would be better if those errors were fixed. Also, adding more details would stabilize the story.