Right, the first 10+ Chapters were so STUPID, CRINGE, FORCED, and LAME. The Guards' behaviour & reaction, the girl action to the MC, the old healer behaviour, the conflict, everything is so forced and stupid. THE MC haven't shown up yet after the first chapter. it gets better. But that beginning is too horrible. i'm the 'first 10 Chapters guy', and those chapters are 3 star almost 2.
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