Writing Quality: 5.0 (I don't see many errors, for me it's almost perfect) Update stability: 5.0 (I don't need to say much about this, the author usually meets deadlines) Story Development: 4.5 (I honestly have my reservations about giving a grade like this, but I'll leave it at 4.5) Character Design: 1.0 (Very poor, the author can't present the characters well, not even his mc, the mc is the most hateful character in the story, even if after chap 40 he has a good improvement, he doesn't get to please me, he is sometimes very idiotic and not in an ordinary way, but in a way that makes him very angry, the characters' dialogues are very strange, robotic at times and emotionless, the way lovers treat each other tends to be too forced ... but with time it improves) World Fund: 4.0 (I'm enjoying what I'm seeing)
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