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Review Detail of AimanFaroqq in Combat Maid Harem

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AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv152yrAimanFaroqq

this is my thought on this novel after reading up to 48 chapters i will be dead honest, this is a novel that i must say.. a hidden gem with extremely big potential to grow with good marketings. It has nice story, good and normal pace plot development, and good character development. I prefer you to put the power level in this world as we still don't know how does one determine their strength. I wish you will have these in the future but anyway its a good novel for me to spend my money on but at the same time, this novel have something that might make veteran readers burst into anger. First of all, although i said the character development is good, the way you write it out can piss people off. I almost threw my phone out of anger reading the first 40 chapter. Yes you want to make MC a naive dumb boy but smart i can accept that, but you exaggerate it. You make him look like a beta japanese male weeb in japan. I suggest you need to fastened his maturity progression in the next 10 chapters or veteran readers will immediately drop this novel. Also about Aleshia, just like I said, u exaggerate it. You make her way too paranoid and this will leave reader a bad taste in their mouth regarding her. Its nice to see a proper relationship progression over his maids one by one as to make the story longer and interesting but dont make it too out of line that it disrespect MC dignity as a noble. Also he is not giving any punishment at all. I would like to see all his maids total obedience to him Also for future readers.. i suggest you all to fast read chapter 1 to 40 as to avoid you leaving this novel.Trust me you will be eager to swipe your card past those chapters. Also trust me as long author not losing few screws in the head for future development, this novel will be a good workout for your slumbering dragon. I will give 4* at the moment because of the updates, character development and world background. I will give 5* after this have more chapters, clarification on power level and a better, brave and mature MC with his maids not being so paranoid. Best of luck. I have insulted and scolded a lot of authors in webnovel considering how they are so terrible making improvement in their novels. I have high expectation on this. Dont let me down My 💰 on you

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Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

is it really worth it kind of hate it rn and I'm just at couple chapters in mc does way too much to get a maid even when he's at death doors can't say I have the motivation to read it

AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

yeah that 40 chapters are big challenge for your mental which is why i fast read those just to know the general situation of the story 😅

Lordmoonlight:is it really worth it kind of hate it rn and I'm just at couple chapters in mc does way too much to get a maid even when he's at death doors can't say I have the motivation to read it
AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

but past those will be chapters that u gonna expect more..so bear with it..i warned on my comment ..

Lordmoonlight:is it really worth it kind of hate it rn and I'm just at couple chapters in mc does way too much to get a maid even when he's at death doors can't say I have the motivation to read it
FallingStone
FallingStoneLv12FallingStone

that true

Bakura_Ryo
Bakura_RyoLv15Bakura_Ryo

I will agree with my fellow brethren even tho I started since day one with this person. the few chapter in the begining was setting me to the point where I just wanna scoop it up and just pass. but it got little better after further in it. I did said to myself I would stop jt but something told me let continue if not I just screw this aftwr that I just start sending bate comment on the MC and just leave it alone. as a fellow degenerate brother if you wish to read this.. than skip threw most of the chapter cause you will want to shot yourself. if other interested. please do or check my stuff *evil grin*

kookssi16
kookssi16Lv1kookssi16

aren't you a little too mean? and yist because you comment and insult authors doesn't make it right for you to do so

AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

Mean? does scolding and advicing an author that dislocated their neurons mean? i hope i can slap their face and burn their novels as to not make them ruin and shame literature any worst if they keep taking advices for granted. Ive read over thousand of books throughout my life and at some part of my studies i always took human physchology as an elective.if i say its stupid and overrated then it is what it is. and i believe my judgement arent senseless. also i give out my reason for calling something stupid unless the author is actually dumb. people these days think just because they have an imagination to write that doesnt give them right to say their book is good. that is just how the world works. if you are a bottom feeder then u need to accept hate and disgust as part of your life if u want to climb the society

kookssi16:aren't you a little too mean? and yist because you comment and insult authors doesn't make it right for you to do so
kookssi16
kookssi16Lv1kookssi16

No one is perfect and they don't need to know that by you saying unnecessary things to them. you can still give advise, of course you can but can't you do it in a nice way. You are acting like you are better than him and that you know everything. I am just trying to explain to you that authors are humans as well, they can make mistakes and it is for us readers to point it out to them but in a loving way so that they know that we are not looking down on them

AimanFaroqq:Mean? does scolding and advicing an author that dislocated their neurons mean? i hope i can slap their face and burn their novels as to not make them ruin and shame literature any worst if they keep taking advices for granted. Ive read over thousand of books throughout my life and at some part of my studies i always took human physchology as an elective.if i say its stupid and overrated then it is what it is. and i believe my judgement arent senseless. also i give out my reason for calling something stupid unless the author is actually dumb. people these days think just because they have an imagination to write that doesnt give them right to say their book is good. that is just how the world works. if you are a bottom feeder then u need to accept hate and disgust as part of your life if u want to climb the society
AimanFaroqq
AimanFaroqqLv15AimanFaroqq

Its because life now is too nice and peace for them that gen z of 2003 above become weak and cry baby.. being nice is not how you discipline and educate someone. scold as long its reasonable.

kookssi16:No one is perfect and they don't need to know that by you saying unnecessary things to them. you can still give advise, of course you can but can't you do it in a nice way. You are acting like you are better than him and that you know everything. I am just trying to explain to you that authors are humans as well, they can make mistakes and it is for us readers to point it out to them but in a loving way so that they know that we are not looking down on them
kookssi16
kookssi16Lv1kookssi16

Only people like you think that and only because of people like you, people have less confidence in themself. if you are going to act like this, I don't think this is a place for you.

AimanFaroqq:Its because life now is too nice and peace for them that gen z of 2003 above become weak and cry baby.. being nice is not how you discipline and educate someone. scold as long its reasonable.
iTride
iTrideLv5iTride

jp beta male.. ugh.. i will still try it tho but ugh

Yue_021
Yue_021Lv13Yue_021

Man, you guys are scaring me with these comments. Well, who cares as long as the story gets better. Then a few chap of suffering is fine. Yup, just 40 chaps. Its only few.

CLIFF_CHAN
CLIFF_CHANLv13CLIFF_CHAN

if you don't like the story then don't read it don't flaunt your achievement here if you don't like it then don't read it than keep ranting how stupid the author

AimanFaroqq:Its because life now is too nice and peace for them that gen z of 2003 above become weak and cry baby.. being nice is not how you discipline and educate someone. scold as long its reasonable.
Necrosavant
NecrosavantLv5Necrosavant

This is one of my most hated MC. I can understand character development but this guys already 18 years old but an 8 year old seems more mature than him. Also Albert's with hime for 20 years and leaves his dumb idiotic young master to a stranger to travel to a different town? Where's the logic in that?

Lacastrian
LacastrianLv4Lacastrian

Loving way?

kookssi16:No one is perfect and they don't need to know that by you saying unnecessary things to them. you can still give advise, of course you can but can't you do it in a nice way. You are acting like you are better than him and that you know everything. I am just trying to explain to you that authors are humans as well, they can make mistakes and it is for us readers to point it out to them but in a loving way so that they know that we are not looking down on them
Hyacinth_Godwin
Hyacinth_GodwinLv2Hyacinth_Godwin

amazing

Spabsta
SpabstaLv14Spabsta

You dont understand how this works do you?

kookssi16:Only people like you think that and only because of people like you, people have less confidence in themself. if you are going to act like this, I don't think this is a place for you.
_Marked_
_Marked_Lv13_Marked_

lol. your comment on his review is funny... did you read it properly, or did you just 'fast read' it? not all advice sounds good. his review is very concise. it helps in what to expect without giving too much of a spoiler. it gives the honest opinion of what can be improved upon. this is just some of the good points of the review. the review gave good as well as bad points of the story. you only thought of the latter in this case. as they say, dont judge a book by its cover. id say factor in the cover but not based it for everything

kookssi16:aren't you a little too mean? and yist because you comment and insult authors doesn't make it right for you to do so
In7rusive7houghts
In7rusive7houghtsLv3In7rusive7houghts

Dude was over here giving proper critique and didn't even have any insults in his review and you for some reason just translated his words as "Mean"? Bruh, what💀

kookssi16:aren't you a little too mean? and yist because you comment and insult authors doesn't make it right for you to do so
In7rusive7houghts
In7rusive7houghtsLv3In7rusive7houghts

And not to even mention, he praised it in the beginning of the review... How in the heck did you miss that and said that he was only insulting the author, like bro, did you missread or something 💀

kookssi16:aren't you a little too mean? and yist because you comment and insult authors doesn't make it right for you to do so