Review Detail of Peggy_Simmons in The Voyage in the Blizzard

I enjoyed the story. What an interesting world concept! I would have liked more comprehensive descriptions of the affection, love, and lust between Lei and Longwei. The leader, Sun, is intriguing. His motives might be more clear if he exhibited his "listening" behavior sooner, to show that he thought he was getting direction from his ancestor. I didn't care for Li Hua, the present queen. She seemed useless. Please ignore the rating for updating stability. This book was complete when I read it. There are some editing problems, including character names changing back and forth in chapters 20-21 and 24-25. I told we novel about that.