Review Detail of Easy_Tiger in THE DRAGON LORD

A real intriguing story is developing with this one. Only two chapters so far but I am really liking what I see. The hook at the end of chapter two came at just the right time to leave me craving for more. I look forward to finding out how the protagonist will pursue the truth regarding the death of her parents. In terms off writing quality, there were only one or two places where an edit could have been beneficial. But these were not enough to hamper my enjoyment of the two chapters so far. This is a story full of promise and I wish the author all the best in the competition. Great effort so far.