If you want a well written story with cohesive and compelling character design, readable dialogue, and a world that you could see yourself in, this is not that story.
AuthorKems
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LIKEThe fact that you don't understand the story quite well from the beginning doesn't make my story lame đ„șor give you a reason to bad mouth my story.... This is my first online story that I'm writing and so far I've been trying my best to live up to so many peoples expectations...I'm not perfectđ...i know I have some grammatical errors and fail to project my story on a literal lane... So please consider a person's feelings before saying what you're not sure about