Review Detail of RkArnold in Alpha Princess's Possessive Mate

I gotta admit having a hard time with this story. FL is stupid and annoying, not noble. It needs an editor. There's tons of stupid little errors and missing words and phrases. Some sections are disjointed like the court scene... "Wait, what? Who did that?" kind of scene confusion. There are some interesting plot components, like special abilities and a diversion from the "mate" trope common to most werewolf stories. The 2ML Channing reminds me of a goofy golden lab; most the secondary characters are caricatures, like the jail guard and his broken record threats... (yes, yes we get he's the bad guy, no need to bash us over the head with it). Sigh. It's decidedly a work in progress. Although an immature work, the author has potential. Many mistakes seem to be simply from a lack of an editor. When an author proofreads their own work they often overlook missing words or letters bc their brain knows what they intended, so it supplies it and they don't catch their own errors. Not trying to be harsh, giving critical feed back. I'm having difficulty developing an emotional connection with these characters. I dunno how far I will go with this book.