Review Detail of mirxkewl in Alpha Princess's Possessive Mate

I really like the description of the FL's personality! I love how she's loyal to her Alpha from the very beginning and that we get to delve right into the conflict from the very beginning of the story. While I do think there could be more clarity in your writing by adding apostrophes to mark the start of internal thoughts or remarks, most of the language is fine. Other characters are also well-written so overall, good book! :D