Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in MAGICAL

Many edits has to be made author. There are sentences that doesn't start with capital letters. Dialogues are not starting with capital letters too and does not end with comma (if an active convo) or period (if the end of convo) or punctuations or question marks. You have a nice story and I hope you will put efforts to edit it. Peace ✌️ I don't want to be critical though but maybe you need my suggestions. 😉