Review Detail of FantasyBliss30 in Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past

Touching story about teenage emotions. The story plot becomes clear right from the start. The motivations of each character are clear too as well as their internal and interpersonal conflicts. Writing wise, simply great. The first person narrative is done correctly, with minimal internal monologues. I did share some humble feedback on dialogues with the author for any future drafts. Definitely an interesting story in the making. Will be following to see what happens to Athena and Aiden. Great job, author!