I applaud the author's strong character voice. Athena's voice is very distinct. I felt the dialogue in some places was a little messy, but it's can be attributed to a charming quirk of the writing style, we are in a teenager's brain after all. the story is fast-paced, but there is a lack of atmospheric descriptions at times that pull me out of the story. in conclusion, I am waiting for the next chapter anxiously!
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