Review Detail of Nr_Yet1208 in Fading Scars: Scars Of The Past

The plot is very relatable and interesting in its own right. however, the writing could be better. The pacing was decent and most of the time, the writing felt smooth. But then there were the times it didn't. I think there's too much telling, maybe that's just a personal opinion. It's nothing too severe like the purple prose realm but it's hanging by the borders. Hopefully, the author would fix this with an edit.