The writing is very smooth, which I enjoyed a lot as it keeps me immersed. I loved how the author handled the character's emotions, as sometimes it can be difficult to portray accurately the turbulence the characters feel, but the author did it well and seemed natural to me. The pacing is well done too, and I really liked it a lot! All the best for the competition!
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