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Its very well you know.....Average...like a good chunk of fanfiction reincarnation protagonist the MCs in this story SOMEHOW as a 17 year old COMPLETELY forgets about her first like parents and SOMEHOW automatically started loving her new parents which like thats not how it works and WTF SHE LITERALLY TELLS HER PARENTS THAT SHE HAS A QUIRK THAT CAN CREATE QURIKS.....For reference it is like a system user that reincarnated telling someone that they reincarnated or have a system Like WHY DID YOU DO THAT the MC is honestly just plain stupid and this story focused on parental love WAY to much because any NORMAL person would choose to be an orphan cause unless your a cold ass mot*erfu**er that is able to abandon there first life extremely quickly then this wont do because human emotions and mental stability are factually impossible to get rid of when you have pretty much no special characteristics. . . Overall Average and also why does the MC become Izukus Childhood friend if she was...well.....Gay Like Why Honestly Suprised She Didnt Die(Too Attached To Her Parents For NO Reason)didnt deserve to be reincarnated honestly like an note for an offer is that with how saturated reincarnation fanfiction is you have to make yours semi unique which is actually quite easy with an female MC...just make the MC straight.
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Thank you for your straight forward imput. I Suppose I started this in not a great way but that is what being a “beginner” is about. Im still learning and imput in very helpful. I wanted to make Kasumi someone who doesn’t live in the past. I understand how It sounds heartless but that is how i wrote it. I was going to make a chapter some time soon about Kasumi’s past. I personally would like more imput since it helps me become a better writer and tells me what you want to see more of. like character development, character backgrounds, etc. Thank you for the review.
Though you can continue the story but if you continue the story it would be at most average.....The reason I am saying this is because she paved the path to be very inconsistent so a tip for the author is if you rewrite this or create another story like this you have to make it so the Mc at LEAST doesent tell so much information on her past life and her cheats.....
Star_chaser07:Thank you for your straight forward imput. I Suppose I started this in not a great way but that is what being a “beginner” is about. Im still learning and imput in very helpful. I wanted to make Kasumi someone who doesn’t live in the past. I understand how It sounds heartless but that is how i wrote it. I was going to make a chapter some time soon about Kasumi’s past. I personally would like more imput since it helps me become a better writer and tells me what you want to see more of. like character development, character backgrounds, etc. Thank you for the review.