Man i get having the beta charecter getting bullied by his women but give him alittle backbone at least ffs. Mc isnt very intelligent, seems 14 regargless of almost 40 years old mentality he should have or at least a proper adult w/rational thought process. World background seems hit and miss, guys supposed to have been reincarnated 18 years ago but its like he knows nothing. I guess they tossed the education system. Couldnt even be bothered to train his body or learn how to fight despite being fully aware of the cultivation world he lives in with another race wanting conquer earth. No big deal just billions died
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LIKEAuthor on webnovel tend to make their mc this way, sometimes even baiting reader with background information that would lead us to believe at least the mc is competent, only to read about how pathetic he act. best example of bait is reincarnated/transmigrated mc, which usually around 18-40 years old, but after the isekai, their IQ drop massively. Best advise if author really want a weak to strong mc, is to not have those. best example is er gen work like renegade immortal, ISSTH, etc. All the mc start out with a very bad condition, and have to learn the hard way from their mistake. In renegade immortal, the mc even regret becoming a cultivator, because his mistake lead to his clan being destoryed. after revenge, he left with emptyness. the list can go on. But One point, I see often is that author who bait reader, usually try to lied to keep people, but deliver a opposite of what their promise. I lose patience with webnovel author, I would rather read mtl poision chinese novel than webnovel, because at least I know what to expect, since most chinese author give clear view of how they gonna write, if it nationalism, we will know within 5 chapter, if it having anything remotely near ntr territory, we got notice way before we read them. if the mc is braindead, we will know within 10 chapter. Not like some webnovel author that lie to reader.
iTz_Hades:This is something I don't get.. Author's forcefully make their characters like that even though they know that the readers don't like it. I mean.. why?? 18 years is not enough for his personality to develop? Why does he need to be Pathetic just so you can make him better later in the name of "Character Development" ?
I don't see much development in the characters, all I read about was how not to do a harem story and what MC personalities to stay away from. I am all for a good harem story where the Harem develops in an organic and smooth way although the only personality I like among the harem is Lauren, this MC's harem is terrible, not necessarily the women, but the MC himself and he seems very irresponsible... All in all, this story is just not it... I'll look for other harems stories that actually develop the personalities among the harem.
This is something I don't get.. Author's forcefully make their characters like that even though they know that the readers don't like it. I mean.. why?? 18 years is not enough for his personality to develop? Why does he need to be Pathetic just so you can make him better later in the name of "Character Development" ?
Sabin_Subedi_Fei:As I stated in the review (I think I did), my books are focused on character development. At first, he is a foolish, pathetic, and facetious character who learns more and more as the story progresses. He will learn what to do and what not to do in different situations.