Review Detail of Feiser in Embodiment of lust.

-It was really good, nothing too serious but it's not a comedy center either. -I don't know if I should point out the grammar errors. I feel like I am being annoying as I usually don't care about this stuff, so please let me know if I should. -If you author starts to use Grammaly the novel wouldn't have any grammatical errors. The errors aren't anything big, just some things that we forget when tired or angry. -I don't know if it's an inside joke that I am not aware but 'Ofcourse' is separated from all I know -There wasn't anything that truly excited me, no climax... things just happen, no impacting scene, cool scene, sad scene. It's nice but it will get boring this way, like a pass time. ( this is just my opinion, I know your history is for self-fulfillment so you can just ignore this if you want as it would affect the writing as a whole)