Review Detail of yohananmikhael in NOVEL (MOVED)
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weak pacing, more into world background. i was waiting for his time but alas, it was all about supernaturals. i just reached chapter 3 and didn't read for since i lose my interest. idk, but the excitement is missing or something a hint of the story. i don't rlly like superheroes society since they got to bland with the plot more focused in the action of the society. so i guess it's not my tea. the impression that it gave me was weak, enough to drain my attention span.
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Thanks for the review. The story pacing is indeed slow. I'm aware of that. Welp, I'm focusing on the world background and mc more. I want readers to get attached to him as he journey through hardships and difficulties so that when mc acquires his powers and gain his first victory in the battle, it'll be the most precious moment for both readers and the mc himself. Welp, I'll try to increase the pace as you suggested but it won't be that fast. hope you understand.