Review Detail of KatieDaeElla_123 in It's Sweet

Hello guys. I'm the author of this work. It's my first time publishing a story and I know that it has a lot of typos, but I am happy that many of you stopped by to read it. I'll be bold, but I hope you can comment down your thoughts and don't worry, I am open to criticisms. Your thoughts matters to me and it might help in the betterment of the flow of the story. Anyway, I hope you'll enjoy my work. Thank you for reading.