Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in The Legend Of Nobody(Spirity)

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉 Advice Please improve author, ❤️ I left advices on the novel and hope it will be followed. I started with such mistakes but I want to improve so I take heed to the advices. I hope you too 🙏