Review Detail of Bob_Uchiha_XD in Summoning America
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Author, do you know why you don't have as many readers? The main problem is that it does not exist, there is no main protagonist and main antagonists. It would be great if this story had a main character and other secondary characters. The story is currently too bland, there is no character development because they are NPCs, there is no personal goal or ambition that drives story development. Author, good luck with your projects. For the next story add main characters. Postscript; the anime "Gate" had 1 main character. The books, movies, comics, animes, manga, with the highest ratings and fundraising had a main character. Even the movie "Titanic" had 2 main characters, being a true story about a maritime accident. đ
Summoning America
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It is harder to sell and make a story with a main character that isn't one person, not even human, In this case we could argue that the main character is the entire planet of Elysia and their antagonist is the Ravernal Empire, or maybe the unknown entities who summoned the nation to the planet. I have only read the manga of the original LN, Japan Summons, so I don't know where its story is right now Now before you say I'm defending this novel like an idiot, like many others who I tried to explain my perspective on in other similar novels. This is from someone also enjoys stories written from a third-person's point of view.