Review Detail of PoundPerSquareInch in Blood Ties: Lastborn of Akatosh (Elder Scrolls / Skyrim / Naruto)

Hey Everyone! I am the author of this Readapted Fanfic(of Igornerd). The edited Versions of the earlier chapters is out and marked with a [2.0] This will be the "clean" version of this fanmade series. You might find these 2.0 Chapters not in "synch" with the events on those that dont had 2.0 marks, This was because those unmarked chapters were the "rough drafts" or preview/experimental versions which were intentionally released to gather some help and reviews on how to improve this series and which ones should be fixed. Please do note also that some 2.0 Chapters may have big changes but some may have none. I am still open to recommendations and suggestions so don't hesitate to notify me. (But still, these versions were not the final state as they may be subjected again to more revisions in the future. Probably if I get more ideas on how to make it better or if I found a good suggestion on the reviews/comments) And I do apologize if you see some quirky or clunky sentences or wrong use of words as I am not that good in English, so any corrections are welcome. \\(>w<\\)