Review Detail of blueLipid in Noob Player

I’ve read up to chapter 125, and so far I’m liking the story! It’s definitely slow paced, but it doesn’t get boring. The story celebrates and builds on the small victories rather than have giant confrontations. I also really enjoy the characters! Each one feels important, and I like seeing them all work together. The only real criticism I have is the grammar. There are a lot of awkward sentences, but the intended meaning does get conveyed anyway. A little editing would make the book a smoother read.