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A good start. I liked the plot. The pacing was slow and fast at times. I wish it was a little more steady. The grammar could use some work and mc seems kind of shallow. I mean, one para, he's excited, the next para he's startled and the next para he's shaking from fear. I wouldn't have complained about this if this wasn't the first chapter. I personally think this needs an edit. But overall, it was a good story.
Being a Ranker is My Full-time Job
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Ha-ha... I am sorry about that. I am just starting to write but I will do my best to keep the pace steady. And about mc, he is also experiencing this for the first time, so, he is easily swayed. But he is being shaped slowly in the upcoming chapters. Hope that you will stick to find out how me and mc will turn out in the future. Thank you again for your response. It was a big help.
Sky_Flower922:Ha-ha... I am sorry about that. I am just starting to write but I will do my best to keep the pace steady. And about mc, he is also experiencing this for the first time, so, he is easily swayed. But he is being shaped slowly in the upcoming chapters. Hope that you will stick to find out how me and mc will turn out in the future. Thank you again for your response. It was a big help.