I have to admit I enjoyed it. The story is solid. For grammar if you use google docs it should pick up about 70% of the glaring errors. I recommend you use that in the future it will greatly help you in your writing and you will also learn what to watch for when writing.
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LIKE90% of what you need Google docs will catch. The big advise I can give you which helps with mine is read your paragraphs outloud. It will help you realize if the flow is good. (feel free to leave a review I just need one more haha)
wewee:ಥ‿ಥ THANK YOU VERY MUCH! yes I've been thinking to review and relearn some of my english lessons to apply a better quality for this book. Your review means so much thank you (༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)