Review Detail of Great_Young_Master in In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park -(Moved to new link)
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I'm writing this review due to one problem I have. I'm not just just talking about this novel alone but also the King of Technology (haven't read the newest one.) The problem is that the author stretches things to the extreme. Arcs that should be over in like 2-3 chapters are over 5. I don't care if english is your main language or not. Writing a story is universal so it doesn't matter if you wrote your whole novel in Spanish or something. However, you're still suffering the same problem that you have with your other story. You have written over 1000 chapters in the King of Technology so you're obviously dedicated in making stories but you gotta fix your story development. It's so slow. And it's slow because you're stretching it with pointless stuff. I think I've said this to your other novel before but I'm making a review this time. You have talent in writing and I really believe that so I hope you consider this review I made. -See ya.
In A Cultivation World With An Entertainment Park -(Moved to new link)
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Whenever you write, how long do you usually write until you're done? Writing that much is something I commend you for or any author. Also, I've heard authors suffering that problem. They have so much stuff they wanna add but they clearly can't add all those things so just pick those ideas you have and have a list on your top 5 favorite or something then eliminate to 3 then to 1. Then do it again but it'll obviously be different because the story might not be originally what you intended it to be so pick from those what you think is the best.
lumydee:š¤§š¤§Yes, bro. I'm really working on that. Sigh... It's always as though I want to put all my ideas in there. I have to pick up the pacešš
Great_Young_Master:Whenever you write, how long do you usually write until you're done? Writing that much is something I commend you for or any author. Also, I've heard authors suffering that problem. They have so much stuff they wanna add but they clearly can't add all those things so just pick those ideas you have and have a list on your top 5 favorite or something then eliminate to 3 then to 1. Then do it again but it'll obviously be different because the story might not be originally what you intended it to be so pick from those what you think is the best.
the guy is right I have the same review, your first novel is very good and I'm still reading it but the problem is that I need to at least wait a week before reading because even though you're writing 2 chapters per day it feels like one chapter or even less. Your novel I'm the king of technology has 1336 chapters but in reality, if we talk about the content it is less than 1000 chapters. And don't forget your novel still has other worlds and I'm really excited about a world of magic.
lumydee:š¤§š¤§Yes, bro. I'm really working on that. Sigh... It's always as though I want to put all my ideas in there. I have to pick up the pacešš