Review Detail of ImperialEdge in I Can't Explain This. My Novel On Relics Became Reality

Great novel with an interesting plot behind it but it falls flat in a lot of places. We haven't gotten a great explanation if the state of the world beyond the MCs introduction and the MC seems to be a rather 2D character, while all the side and supporting characters are 1D especially the existence of a female who continues to try to stop the ML from doing things - not even an antagonist - only to essentially get proven wrong, it seems like that's her sole reason for existing and it likely is. The antagonists are unnecessarily hostile, but that's not new to WebNovels, to the point that their hostility makes no sense. If all the types of characters could be raised by a dimension each, this would be a much better novel.