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Kikiyobear
KikiyobearLv13yrKikiyobear

Your story has potential, I can see it growing. With these points, I'll say that the pace is a bit slow concerning the first chapter, also there's not enough flesh. The dialogue can be better. I'll say invest in a beta reader. The story had much promise and I'm adding it to my library.

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Being Supernatural

HoneyMercado

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HoneyMercado
HoneyMercadoAuthorHoneyMercado

Thanks so much!!! I’ll try to improve. Can you give me a number rating as well?

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Kikiyobear
KikiyobearLv1Kikiyobear

For now, I’ll rate your story a solid 5.4, this is because the first chapter didn’t make me read the next. I did because I had too. But by the time you invest in a beta reader or an editor, you’ll be on fire.

HoneyMercado:Thanks so much!!! I’ll try to improve. Can you give me a number rating as well?
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