Review Detail of MunCL in The Power of Evil

Looking forward to seeing how a book with bad spelling for a synopsis can give me mental health issues

Thanks for your comments. 🥰

Seriously? Any suggestions? Please, give me your opinion 😇

Instead of telling some parts of story just say the character's introduction and his goal.Also,I did not understand the synopsis

One that is understandable might help.

Sorry, I'm newbie,, 🥺🥺

No problem with that as long as you enjoy writing for the cause of writing but not as a way to make some quick buck, which comes across from your comment. No one is born a writer…. It takes dedication and effort. And that starts with a well thought out introduction. I will read a few pages of your work and give my opinion when I’m done. Have a nice weekend.

Thank you so much for your support🥰 I'll do my best,, Being a global writer is something new for me. When I started, I also continued to learn. Thank you for you opinion 💞

FIX YOUR BASIC ERROR RE READ YOUR WRITING

I know dude. 😇 That is my first draft. I'm not edit yet. Sorry🙏

Not Harem,, Evil? Ouh, will be spoiler if I say it.😅

Not Evil, but can be evil

is mc evil? is it no harem?

U could have gone with better names for characters. Ken and Jerry kinda ruin the kingdom vibe for me. Just a suggestion tho.

Thanks for your opinion. 💕 I'll make better name for my next novel.

i have read the novel to chapter 5 and i did not understand anything. you should edit it

Sure, I'll Edit my novel soon. Thank you

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