Review Detail of BLACKYTHEDOG in Inverse System

Item: Inverse System
Rating: 1.6

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BLACKYTHEDOGLv32yrBLACKYTHEDOG

The whole concept is good but the characters doing some cringe moment and some weird logic responses. I tried reading some more but i can't take it anymore so i decided not to torture myself.

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Wizzez

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WizzezAuthorWizzez

Thats infortunate to hear, but I see that you only reached chapter 3. The story starts to shape up for the better at chapter 10. My first few chapters were my first go at writing, so many of the problems are fixed at about chapter 10. I’ll hope you give it another try, but if not, thats fine, and thanks for reading!

2yr

shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

hey, just wanted to know if this harem or not? (Please say it is.)

Wizzez:Thats infortunate to hear, but I see that you only reached chapter 3. The story starts to shape up for the better at chapter 10. My first few chapters were my first go at writing, so many of the problems are fixed at about chapter 10. I’ll hope you give it another try, but if not, thats fine, and thanks for reading!

2yr

HiggsLv3Higgs

dear author i read up until 38 and the logic of your characters are still messed up. I suggest you read psychological novel and shows or better yet imagine yourself in the MCs shoes. Dont tell me that you too can take seeing the killer of your family? and for a long time at that.

2yr