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Review Detail of YunaYo in Inverse System

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YunaYo
YunaYoLv22yrYunaYo

If you can get past the beginning, where some of the author's inexperiences are shown, it's actually really good. The fights are cool and characters are well written. Writing quality - I see a couple of people complaining about grammar in some other reviews, but I haven't seen any major writing error, maybe some small ones that can easily be glossed over. All in all, it's well written. Stability of Updates - no complaints here. 1 chapter per day, and a promised mass release Story development - Something happens in every arc, and the story seems to be developing smoothly. No complaints. Character Design - As I said earlier, I've been finding the side characters really enjoyable so far, which is rare in a system novel where the mc is the only star. Romance is good too, noharem as promised by the tag. World Background - Well, you can tell a lot of thought has gone into the world building before you even start reading the novel. There's an entire map of the world, and the setting of the world is portrayed well as the story continues. TLDR, the story starts to shine after the timeskip, at least in my opinion. At the end of the day, you shouldn't care about what I think. Make your own opinion

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Wizzez
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Thanks for the review! Honestly, I can't fault you for anything you said. I agree that the beginning is my weakest point, and it puts a lot of readers off. I'd like to think that I've improved, so thanks for saying so 😅

Ollie_Hanlon_clark
Ollie_Hanlon_clarkLv14Ollie_Hanlon_clark

I'm gonna power through solely because how interesting the concept is to me very cool power

Wizzez:Thanks for the review! Honestly, I can't fault you for anything you said. I agree that the beginning is my weakest point, and it puts a lot of readers off. I'd like to think that I've improved, so thanks for saying so 😅
Wizzez
WizzezAuthorWizzez

Thanks! I wish everyone did that instead of dropping it after chapters 1 or 2 😅

Ollie_Hanlon_clark:I'm gonna power through solely because how interesting the concept is to me very cool power
Ollie_Hanlon_clark
Ollie_Hanlon_clarkLv14Ollie_Hanlon_clark

to report WORTH IT very good book the start especially the first couple of chapters eeeh but after that really picks up after the time skip as well

Wizzez:Thanks! I wish everyone did that instead of dropping it after chapters 1 or 2 😅
Pandalph
PandalphLv14Pandalph

From what I can read the book looks good but just not what I like (from the comments including this one)

Wizzez:Thanks! I wish everyone did that instead of dropping it after chapters 1 or 2 😅
Sweatercat
SweatercatLv14Sweatercat

When do you say the chapter start becoming better?

Wizzez:Thanks for the review! Honestly, I can't fault you for anything you said. I agree that the beginning is my weakest point, and it puts a lot of readers off. I'd like to think that I've improved, so thanks for saying so 😅