Review Detail of FlameCookies in The Desire Demon

So it's your boi the author, so I'm commenting on this novel to tell you what you will expect after writing 15 chaps: Bad: 1- The first chapters will be the worst thing you'll ever read. 2- The story will be so flawed as this is my first novel. 3- I'm so bad at imagining stuff so flawed world and character building is expected. 4-Bad grammar as this is again my first novel. Good: 1- I try to make this novel the best it could be. 2- I (will when I have commenters, sad) use your thoughts to approve this novel as I want you to participate on creating this novel. 3- I'm a very hard working man. 4- I'm a very good friend. 5- I love writing so it's not expected for me to drop this one, not with all of that support. And a lot of other stuff! So please give this novel a chance, and please of you want to drop it, read until chap 10 then decide! Anyways It was your boi FlameCookie. PLEASE GIVE ME A CHANCE!