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D_Wolf
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First is the obvious issue of grammar and pronoun usage. Often times you do not know if the character is male or female because the pronouns used are switched for the same character over and over again. For the most part I have been able to ignore that issue as there is a lot of content and for the most part I find the premise to be enjoyable. The story itself has one of the worst 'goldfingers' that I have come across. Basically the MC is just a machine used to transfer various works from one universe to his current one. He gets little to no benefit for doing so except to make money and fame. He gets points to unlock other mangas from Universe A so that he can make an exact copy of it in his current Universe. The only changes that he seems to be making is cut out filler chapters or to try to make the art a bit more up-to-date. I have read similar works such as 'I am a superstar' or others like it where the MC is plagiarizing from one universe into his current one but at least there is usually some concrete benefit built into the 'goldfinger' such as skills or attribute gains. If anything at least the MC should be given the increased creativity to make changes and update and personalize the work for his universe and situation. Just maybe give him a sight bonus so that he can see the prospective popularity or objective quality/rating of the piece once it is created. Don't just act as a copier for your system.

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I just want to quietly draw comics

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