The character is arrogant to the point of stupidity and then goes beyond when he decries other people for being arrogant. Be humble. Other than that, there are no other problems...well there is also nothing that makes it stick out either though. Good luck with the novel, judging by the other reviews, there is demand for a self absorbed hypocrite type MC.
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