Review Detail of TrueShine in '-------'

My writing style is fairly boring from my perspective, fair warning there. Not much experience in writing and that's why I'm writing. What better than actual experience? If you decide to read, just know that. ..... The writing quality shouldn't be awful but definitely ain't the brightest you'll see. The story's plot/development can't be said to be the greatest, but I don't think it's awful though could be bias? The starting could have been done better but can't change what's already written. Character design... One of my faults is the lack of ability to create good characters. I can't be the judge as my own perspective isn't great so you may decide after reading a little. World Background... I do explore the world MC is at but not in great detail and probably far to little. In the future (Current Arc as well) I'll definitely focus more on it. --- I'm a bad judge, but this is fairly accurate so read but don't expect anything great.