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Review Detail of SpackRox in Naruto : The Wind Calamity

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SpackRox
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At Chapter 23 This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better. The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world. So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story. The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak. So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic. Kudos to the author.

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Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Devil_Hex

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its_L
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author san as one of your fellow readers who is reading this novel from the start I would like to make a suggestion that you should consider Romance it should not be heavy romance a little bit would do as our protagonist is transmigrated individual he doesn't have any real bond till now so having a partner can really make him the person of the ninja world having future knowledge he knows what he will face and his burden is immense so there should be someone who can atleast support him someone who can stand by him someone who brings warmth to him I know our mc is rational and cold but there need to be someone who can make him feel warmth make him feel that he is not just doing this all to survive but to also have a peaceful future with someone to have a family to have someone or something to protect. ita just my suggestion it still depends on your thinking and even if there won't be any sub Romance i still love your novel

Devil_Hex:None
Devil_Hex
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Thanks

BigReader500
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I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.

Arco
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Any romance or harem?

Devil_Hex:Thanks
Devil_Hex
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None

Arco:Any romance or harem?
its_L
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he is only 13 what romance would you expect from a child and knowing that there are big villains like madara zetsu and kaguya out there and he had to face them in future how do you expect him to have time for romance and all

BigReader500:I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.
machadogbc
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None for both or only harem?

Devil_Hex:None
Interesting_Okay
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A rational mind can't think of any Romance when there are hundreds of people that wants you dead in an instant. Also there are thousands of Naruto stories that have romance. So reading a fanfic that doesn't have any Romance is quite refreshing.

BigReader500:I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.
Interesting_Okay
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Our MC is a transmigrated in the Naruto world that's why he doesn't have romance. If he find a civilian girl/kunoichi who is loyal to the village and became he's gf. If he ever told her about the future, she'll immediately tell the hokage. Anyway our MC doesn't have any time for romance. He needs to prepare for Madara and kaguya as soon as possible.

its_L:author san as one of your fellow readers who is reading this novel from the start I would like to make a suggestion that you should consider Romance it should not be heavy romance a little bit would do as our protagonist is transmigrated individual he doesn't have any real bond till now so having a partner can really make him the person of the ninja world having future knowledge he knows what he will face and his burden is immense so there should be someone who can atleast support him someone who can stand by him someone who brings warmth to him I know our mc is rational and cold but there need to be someone who can make him feel warmth make him feel that he is not just doing this all to survive but to also have a peaceful future with someone to have a family to have someone or something to protect. ita just my suggestion it still depends on your thinking and even if there won't be any sub Romance i still love your novel
its_L
its_LLv3its_L

I never said that he should have a partner right now or something and why would he say that he is a transmigrated person to anyone and liking anyone of any village actually won't matter because they have to unite against madara in future so loyalty to village is really nothing to be concerned about and mc himself is trying his best to keep himself and the village safe so yeah.

Interesting_Okay:Our MC is a transmigrated in the Naruto world that's why he doesn't have romance. If he find a civilian girl/kunoichi who is loyal to the village and became he's gf. If he ever told her about the future, she'll immediately tell the hokage. Anyway our MC doesn't have any time for romance. He needs to prepare for Madara and kaguya as soon as possible.