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Review Detail of KingAraragi in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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KingAraragi
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I have completed the first chapter, and I swear to you, I am definitely going to read more. Unfortunately, It's late and I need to go to bed, but I wanna get this review out while all this info is in my head. Plot: 9.5/10 Really intriguing plot. I'm new to Webnovel, so I don't know how unique it is, but I have watched and played stories similar. Which is totally not a bad thing at all. If anything, it made me enjoy the story a whole lot more. Knowing some of the source material gave me deeper understandings of the characters and their motivations. The only reason I'm giving a 9.5 is because at some points the story is very explain-y, if that makes any sense. There was a lot of info given at one time. I mostly retained the information, but there were times I had to go back and read it to understand what was happening. Characters: 10/10 Really intriguing characters. There are times I read books on this website, and I completely forget the cast and who they're supposed to be. And with the lack of much dialogue in this one, I assumed the character's would be forgettable. But they weren't. Part of this is the interesting names you gave them. Red RIding Hood, or Red, and Clementine are a few example. The lines they do have are memorable and intriguing. World: 11/10 This was my absolute favorite part about your story. I really felt immersed in the world you tried to build. Like, really immersed. The setting was relatable, because everyone has seen shows with Kingdoms and villages and stuff like that. And the whole Virtual Reality aspect added depth to the setting. Overall, this is a great story. I really wanna read more. There were a few minor errors, but they really don't reflect the author or their style at all. That's all they are, tiny mistakes. And I see that you're competing for the Webnovel Spirity Awards. This definitely deserves one of the top spots. And I'm saying that even though I'm technically supposed to be competing against you, lol. Keep up the good work!

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NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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kuhaku_sora
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Thank you, man! I will keep an eye out too for your upcoming chapters! You should also join WPC! Maybe we would also meet there! Since you have a knack for writing quality novels, I guess joining two contest would be a great start for you too. That's how I worked my way to somehow get a decent amount of fame and earning money to my novels. But the greatest part about it is to make stories that would move people like you and other readers. Money can always be earned. Fame will always be there. But giving a heartfelt lessons to the readers, that's priceless. Kudos for the two of us~

KingAraragi
KingAraragiLv1KingAraragi

Thanks for suggesting that. I’m pretty new, so I haven’t actually heard of that before. It seems like a good idea to maybe gain some notoriety and to improve as a writer. You’ve been a great help to me. I usually lie when i’m saying this, but I really mean it when I say I’m gonna continue to support you and your story. Thanks for being so nice!

kuhaku_sora:Thank you, man! I will keep an eye out too for your upcoming chapters! You should also join WPC! Maybe we would also meet there! Since you have a knack for writing quality novels, I guess joining two contest would be a great start for you too. That's how I worked my way to somehow get a decent amount of fame and earning money to my novels. But the greatest part about it is to make stories that would move people like you and other readers. Money can always be earned. Fame will always be there. But giving a heartfelt lessons to the readers, that's priceless. Kudos for the two of us~
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