Review Detail of waurpel in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

The premise itself is not exactly unique, but it's a fresh and unique take on it and I appreciate that the writer didn't rely on the traditional twist of the genre. It's also an interesting choice of main character who wouldn't normally be expected to be much of a fighter. I'm not a huge fan of using characters heavily inspired of other stories, but it isn't executed distastefully and the characters have depth beyond the established narrative so no further complaints on that! The grammar could use some work, but beyond that a solid start to an intersting story!