Review Detail of Aeipathy_02 in NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

Item: NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
Rating: 5

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I'm hooked 😌 Writing Quality. Though there are minimal typos here and there, it's not really much to obstruct the reading of the reader. The narratives were easy to read at the same time detailed. Stability of Updates. So far the author has a stable update every day which is great! Story Development. Well phased. From the start, you already gave us what to expect for the story an NPC that realizes she is on a game at the same time keeps surprising with many developments as I continued reading. Especially, with the quest request and second mc, Uchida, well things get more interesting as you read. I hope this continues. Character Design. What intrigues me always with any story is character growth. As well, their rich background story that made them, the people they are. Red from the virtual game and Uchida from the real world. Quite an intriguing setting for the two too. And they already both experienced hardships at the very beginning especially Red. I would like to see how they'll grow from there. World Background. It is well crafted and detailed. Overall this story is definitely a cup of my tea. Well done author! Keep up the good work! I'll continue reading this!

NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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aawww that's very sweet of you ;-;. Sorry for the typos and all ;-; I am the only one who proofreads the story hahahahahaha. There are also filter words from here and there, so I need to fix those too. Yup! Of course I will~ I want to relate their characters to their original stories as well to give them a more in depth story. *the grandmother, La Finta Nonna, is also the "Grandmother" in the story, but in the elve's territory *Ryoshi means hunter. But here, in Code, he was the one who killed Clementine (and did not rescue Red from the monster) *Match (I won't spoil anything from her XD) *Alice (from Wonderland)- A doll and an NPC who was also aware of the game. *Snow White (and the seven dwarves) *Merchant (Reference of "Duke" from the resident evil franchise.

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