Review Detail of Limhkekkoun in The Strait Of Cosmos

Item: The Strait Of Cosmos
Rating: 2.2

Review detail

LimhkekkounLv32yrLimhkekkoun

the writing is good but the mc all way make The same mistakes never learn her lesson like she know she not strong enough and how did she not died one she always face super strong opoonent and she always got captured and the story it keep putting more information down that im so confused. P.s i like the writing style maybe make the mc smarter Because she always weak and still went in and fight just to be Captured also dont Threw the information left and right. And thank you

The Strait Of Cosmos

Enderchronos

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EnderchronosAuthorEnderchronos

Most of that is subject to change, I still have to edit it; but it gets a lot more stable afterwards. Imogen gains a good amount of strength in my eyes, and the behind story becomes ever so slightly simpler. Thank you for your review, I love when I know what I need to do to improve!

2yr

EnderchronosAuthorEnderchronos

Everything before The Starved Python Of The East is unedited, and will be changed later by the way.

2yr

BrabbitXLv5BrabbitX

has it bee changed? because no1 likes reading about an mc that makes the same mistakes over n over again.

Enderchronos:Everything before The Starved Python Of The East is unedited, and will be changed later by the way.

2yr

EnderchronosAuthorEnderchronos

Indeed it has, though this story was mostly a learning opportunity for me. I'll finish it later but I'm working on other stories for now. Read this if you don't mind a work in progress. Otherwise, I'm currently working on another story called The Reign of The Reawakened Wyrm. Have a rapturous day!

BrabbitX:has it bee changed? because no1 likes reading about an mc that makes the same mistakes over n over again.

2yr