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Hey author, just wanna say to keep it up... I didnt even know that I craved such a genre especially one of India, by an Indian, for India... I am immensely proud and hope you don't make it pay to read... I know you deserve to be rewarded for your efforts and I have donated my only power stone to you but you have to understand that I am but a 11th standard student and do not have the money nor the freedom to spend it on this work of art... I really like this work and hope for more chapters and if I were to recommend a few things it would be for you to introduce more romance, maybe even some R18 😉, Will the MC have a harem or maybe more that one wife/lover as seeing the setting, background, potential and genius of the MC it would be unrealistic for him to not have more proposals or even meet other women eh he would be smitten by, I would ala like if you introduce the world a bit more and a little bit of spice by adding something of a scheme or political battle and maybe an assassination attempt... and lastly I would like you to introduce more historical figures, show how some parts of history were actually different than what was written and maybe change the fates of some significant historical figures who were destined to die undeserved deaths due to their circumstances and the hand dealt to them by fate... hope this helps and once again great work that makes me proud to be an Indian. . . . P.S. I saw what you did at the start with the guns and ammunitions and its manufacturing and while I know what you are trying to do with it I would have liked if you traded or schemed to get the method to produce them during ancient times and then experiment or use modern knowledge to improve them. . . . I forgot to ask you for the year he reincarnated in cuz although the timeline is messed up it would help me visualize the changes more or you could give like x centuries and y decades left to independence or modern times or something... I swear this was the last and goodbye.

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