Review Detail of rydertheking in My King System

Reading through the novel, it was abit difficulty in the first 2 chapters to really understand the overall plot. Maybe it is because a bunch of text clumped together isn't really good for the eyes of any reader. But i must say, the plot idea is really well done although generic to be honest. I'll say this though, you should make sure chapters are more spaced out, and much less cluttered. Even if it means less word count, it helps us readers really understand the plot more. I only read up to Chapter 12, but i genuinely believe that if you keep going it'll be a really good novel worthy of being uploaded on the platform. This has a lot of potential, i hope you write more!