Review Detail of EnvoysIntuiton in System Journey to Godhood

An interesting story, with such a unique concept. The characters are well developed and relevance in the story. The world building is good as well. Naturally there is always room for improvement, I think you should give the fml more depth and character development. I understand she is learning of emotions but we have only seen her display 2 extremes on the spectrum of emotions. At times she may come across as arrogant. But nonetheless this is definitely one of my favourites, due to its uniqueness. I truly hope that you continue this work of yours, as it would be akin to a sin to not let us as readers get to see the journey of the fmc and fml as a whole as well as how they end up at the end of their story.