Review Detail of Want_A_Martini in My Choice System

Just an examination of the writer's style. There's a frequent lack or overuse of punctuation that makes sentences flow awkwardly. The author's sentence structuring and wording, in general, can also create a strange read at times. However, grammatical errors are minimal, and to give credit where credit's due, the Author has an exceptional vocabulary and word sense. This prevents them from overdoing one of my biggest irks with novels on the site, rapidly overusing the same words in a small area of text. An example of what I mean would be, "The other boys were going to attack but the leader stood up gesturing to not attack." This example was ripped straight out of a fairly popular novel.