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Review Detail of Aciee_GelaTin in Forge of Shadows

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Aciee_GelaTin
Aciee_GelaTinLv32yrAciee_GelaTin

The overall concept of the story is quite interesting. Beautiful book cover and well-written synopsis. So far, the storytelling has been smooth and so is the pace. The dialogues and interactions between the characters are really engaging as well. Overall, it's a great work 😊

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Forge of Shadows

Winter_Iris

Liked it!

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Winter_Iris
Winter_IrisAuthorWinter_Iris

Thank you! Dialogue is something I struggle with and I am glad it sounds fine.

2yr
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Aciee_GelaTin
Aciee_GelaTinLv3Aciee_GelaTin

They seem fine for me, though there are rooms for improvement of course ☺️ They'll get better with practice

Winter_Iris:Thank you! Dialogue is something I struggle with and I am glad it sounds fine.
2yr
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Winter_Iris
Winter_IrisAuthorWinter_Iris

Yes! I will keep improving and working hard!

Aciee_GelaTin:They seem fine for me, though there are rooms for improvement of course ☺️ They'll get better with practice
2yr
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