Review Detail of MiniAwesome1 in The Entire Mankind is Acting As Me, I Shall Secretly Build a Battleship and Shock the World

NOTE: THE NOVEL IS NOT FINISHED!!! I would not have used passes to read it if I had known that. Based on what is here, I likely would have rated it higher if the novel really were completed. The main story from Raymond's POV is pretty good, but the breaks/subplot giving the POV of the rest of the world get a bit too lengthy in the later third of the novel.